Saturday, September 03, 2011

Haiku- Birds Of Your Memories





I tried to kill the
birds of your cold memories,
but remained crippled.

Memories that were
fetched, when time brought us closer,
we breathed same fragrances.

 As it was written,
the separation of hearts,
our life went apart.

But now, every time,
when i close my eyes to open
lonely crying heart,

birds of memories,
fly back just to console me,
with lovely big wings.

I tried to kill the
birds of your cold memories,
but remained crippled.

6 comments:

Sangita Ekka said...

Can't be better! Its perfectly beautiful...:)

Kitty said...

very nicely expressed the feelings... beautiful ! :)

Aakriti said...

@kitty: i hv tried my best to express each n every thought, as properly as i could!!!!!!!
Thanks for coming friend...........

Aakriti said...

@Sangita: Thank you so much dear! Thanks for dropping by and leaving such a nice comment!:)

Keep coming!

Balqis said...

I really enjoyed reading this lovely Haiku and the messages in it. :)

Aakriti said...

Thank you Balqis.

Keep coming!!! :)