Monday, October 10, 2011

Haiku- A small journey


I started with a 
lust, but ended with a wise
lesson about life.

12 comments:

Saru Singhal said...

Profound...You can dig into few words...

Kitty said...

Very mature haiku ! loved this :)

Balqis said...

Smartly written when you started with a lust and ended with something big and priceless - a wise lesson about life. A short stanza expresses volumes! Waiting and wanting to read more. :)

Aakriti said...

@Saru: Thank you friend for such a motivating comment! :)

Aakriti said...

@Kitty: Thank you Kittu...... i wish its deepness is understood by every reader! :)

Aakriti said...

@Balqis, Thanks for such a great comment. I loved when appreciate my work and requests t read more!
:)

Samrat said...

Nice lines with deeper connotations.

Aakriti said...

Welcome to my blog Samrat.....thanks a lot for leaving a comment! :)

Suresh Shrestha said...

Then your journey might have been troublesome :( and got relief in the end,:) since you could have a wise lesson! Anyway, now begin a new journey with the wise lesson!
Ah! what is that wise lesson? :)

Aakriti said...

Thanks Suresh for your words. I am trying to start the new journey with that wise lesson! :)

JoJo said...

I love this haiku! every journey is a new beginning, with many lessons to be learned and discovered...

Aakriti said...

@Jojo: Thnks dear for dropping by and leaving your kind words! :)