Haiku- A small journey


I started with a 
lust, but ended with a wise
lesson about life.

Comments

Saru Singhal said…
Profound...You can dig into few words...
Kitty said…
Very mature haiku ! loved this :)
Balqis said…
Smartly written when you started with a lust and ended with something big and priceless - a wise lesson about life. A short stanza expresses volumes! Waiting and wanting to read more. :)
Aakriti said…
@Saru: Thank you friend for such a motivating comment! :)
Aakriti said…
@Kitty: Thank you Kittu...... i wish its deepness is understood by every reader! :)
Aakriti said…
@Balqis, Thanks for such a great comment. I loved when appreciate my work and requests t read more!
:)
Samrat said…
Nice lines with deeper connotations.
Aakriti said…
Welcome to my blog Samrat.....thanks a lot for leaving a comment! :)
Suresh Shrestha said…
Then your journey might have been troublesome :( and got relief in the end,:) since you could have a wise lesson! Anyway, now begin a new journey with the wise lesson!
Ah! what is that wise lesson? :)
Aakriti said…
Thanks Suresh for your words. I am trying to start the new journey with that wise lesson! :)
JoJo said…
I love this haiku! every journey is a new beginning, with many lessons to be learned and discovered...
Aakriti said…
@Jojo: Thnks dear for dropping by and leaving your kind words! :)