Haiku- The tail of hope.



Hold the tail of hope,
more tightly, especially
when others have left.

Comments

Saru Singhal said…
I'm a perfect example of hope against hope:) Beautiful Haiku...
Saru
Aakriti said…
Thank you saru......Keep coming! :)
Balqis said…
This is indeed a very meaningful Haiku. Loved it when you said, "Hold......tightly, especially when others left". Being left alone doesn't mean a person can't stand on her/his own. Life goes on when s/he knows how to survive. Looking forward to reading more of your works. :)

This haiku is so inspiring, too! :)
Aakriti said…
Thanks a lot for your words Balqis! :)
Suresh Shrestha said…
It is nice to have a hope when others are hopeless.
But, I have a different view if you don't mind. I say "Don't hope for anything - keep doing what is assigned you as your right duty"
Aakriti said…
Its ok Suresh. I support your perception too!
Thanks for your honest words!