Wednesday, October 05, 2011

Haiku- The tail of hope.



Hold the tail of hope,
more tightly, especially
when others have left.

6 comments:

Saru Singhal said...

I'm a perfect example of hope against hope:) Beautiful Haiku...
Saru

Aakriti said...

Thank you saru......Keep coming! :)

Balqis said...

This is indeed a very meaningful Haiku. Loved it when you said, "Hold......tightly, especially when others left". Being left alone doesn't mean a person can't stand on her/his own. Life goes on when s/he knows how to survive. Looking forward to reading more of your works. :)

This haiku is so inspiring, too! :)

Aakriti said...

Thanks a lot for your words Balqis! :)

Suresh Shrestha said...

It is nice to have a hope when others are hopeless.
But, I have a different view if you don't mind. I say "Don't hope for anything - keep doing what is assigned you as your right duty"

Aakriti said...

Its ok Suresh. I support your perception too!
Thanks for your honest words!