Cinquain- Quill Pen



Quill pen,
writes silences,
when words are lost somewhere,
feelings struggling for hard outcry,
a shaft.

Comments

Balqis said…
This is beautiful! :)
Sagittarian said…
Great piece!:) Pleasant day/evening!:)
Suresh Shrestha said…
So majestic the quill pen is!
And, so intense your creation is!!
:)
aakriti said…
@Balqis: Thank u friend! :)
aakriti said…
@saggi: Thanks for your comment! :)
aakriti said…
@suresh: pleased to hv u in ma blog after a long tym! Thanks for dropping by and leaving your words Suresh! :)
The Narcissist said…
There is a style of writing poetry where each line has increasing number of words and after the middle line there is a decreasing number of words. It has a name that I cannot recall. You should try that sometime :)
Aakriti said…
I guess you are talking about the pyramids pattern! I'll definetly give it a try! :)