Friday, December 09, 2011

Cinquain- Quill Pen



Quill pen,
writes silences,
when words are lost somewhere,
feelings struggling for hard outcry,
a shaft.

8 comments:

Balqis said...

This is beautiful! :)

Sagittarian said...

Great piece!:) Pleasant day/evening!:)

Suresh Shrestha said...

So majestic the quill pen is!
And, so intense your creation is!!
:)

aakriti said...

@Balqis: Thank u friend! :)

aakriti said...

@saggi: Thanks for your comment! :)

aakriti said...

@suresh: pleased to hv u in ma blog after a long tym! Thanks for dropping by and leaving your words Suresh! :)

The Narcissist said...

There is a style of writing poetry where each line has increasing number of words and after the middle line there is a decreasing number of words. It has a name that I cannot recall. You should try that sometime :)

Aakriti said...

I guess you are talking about the pyramids pattern! I'll definetly give it a try! :)